Starting Block

Flyer

Seed Packaging

Presentation Feedback

— The start was knocked out of the park, then lost the way a bit

— Strip some info out, hint so the listener wants to hear more

— Branding didn’t quite sit with what was talking about, didn’t state it was about plants

— Some photos need to be swapped out, get that Kiwi photo!

— Don't need to talk about dying plants in the presentation

— Add seeds in the packaging (Emma hand the seed packaging, to emphasise a certain point)

— State the starts are for NZ

— How many plants are needed to reduce/purify how many litres of carbon dioxide

— Seems like we were presenting a project not a business proposition

— Connecting app to plant centre was a good idea

— The way the app can work with proximity makes it suitable for what we are trying to accomplish

— Notification for 'Welcome home! It's been three days, don't forget to water 'Borris' today." was great

— Good presenters, good double act. Both commanding in your own way

— Good laughs (nanas wisdom)

— Overall the experience sounds awesome, presentation just needs some fine tuning

Business Proposal

Some Presentation Slides

Public health experts and Wellington students claim poor living conditions are causing respiratory illness.

https://www.tvnz.co.nz/one-news/new-zealand/gives-me-asthma-calls-warrant-fitness-nzs-damp-cold-homes

Presentation Feedback Week6

• Great stats
• Context info good
• Start with idea then go into context
• Start with a question to engage us
• Too much info in the beginning 
• Liked personalising plant 
• How do we tell them an app will make it easier 
• What validation have we had? Show the validation quote - Convince us there are people on our side 
• Damp homes etc on a wider scale, everyone in NZ 
• Who is the target audience? 
• Movement towards healthy homes 
• Why do we need this app? 
• Only do social change if it benefits your idea if the cycle makes sense 

Survey Results