Business Proposal

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Public health experts and Wellington students claim poor living conditions are causing respiratory illness.

https://www.tvnz.co.nz/one-news/new-zealand/gives-me-asthma-calls-warrant-fitness-nzs-damp-cold-homes

Presentation Feedback Week6

• Great stats
• Context info good
• Start with idea then go into context
• Start with a question to engage us
• Too much info in the beginning 
• Liked personalising plant 
• How do we tell them an app will make it easier 
• What validation have we had? Show the validation quote - Convince us there are people on our side 
• Damp homes etc on a wider scale, everyone in NZ 
• Who is the target audience? 
• Movement towards healthy homes 
• Why do we need this app? 
• Only do social change if it benefits your idea if the cycle makes sense 

Survey Results

Presentation Feedback

Name and idea first

Start with a question 

Do you struggle to keep pants alive 

Liked 'water borris'

How do you tell me an app will make it easier for me

Add in validation

User validation

Re frame damp homes

Say target audience

Heathy homes

Restructure order

Next presentation 6 mins

Presentation slides